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Hey, Todd- thanks for sharing your song. (You might get more feedback if you include the lyrics in the future.) It’s pretty retro melodically and production-wise. That’d make it a lot harder to get recorded by an artist, if that’s your goal. If it’s not your goal, then don’t worry- just make yourself happy.
I like that you hit the title right at the top of the chorus and again in the middle. No doubt what the hook is, and that’s so important.
Keep on writing!
July 26, 2019
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Hey, Todd- thanks for sharing your song. (You might get more feedback if you include the lyrics in the future.) It’s pretty retro melodically and production-wise. That’d make it a lot harder to get recorded by an artist, if that’s your goal. If it’s not your goal, then don’t worry- just make yourself happy.
I like that you hit the title right at the top of the chorus and again in the middle. No doubt what the hook is, and that’s so important.
Keep on writing!
July 26, 2019
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