This is a re-write of the last song i posted about the fact you Cant Wait to see someone you haven't seen in a while
Hey Frank thankyou for the feedback. This was more of a personal angle i was taking with the song and things i was feeling at the time. Like i diary entry kinda thing/letter to my girl. I see you angle as a soldier, that could be something else i could work on for sure. As you know sometimes its a challenge painting a picture in 3 mins that everyone can relate to. cheers for your time
June 05, 2019
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Feels like a lifetime since i've seen your angelic face
What i wouldn't give right now just to taste your lips
The anticipation has been building up inside
I wanna sense the touch of your fingertips
Ooh Yeh I
Chorus
Cant wait to see you, do the things that i've missed
Feel you lying next to me, relive the first time we kissed
Skin on skin, breathing you in
Keeping me up all night
I Can't, I can't wait
Counting down the days til i hold you in my arms
Facetimin’ everyday, well it just ain't enough
I want to run my fingers through your long brown hair
Make your bed just to mess it up
Oh yeh i
Chorus
Cant wait to see you, do the things that i've missed
Feel you lying next to me, relive the first time we kissed
Skin on skin, breathing you in
Keepin me up all night
I Can't, I can't wait
How long is too long?
I’m cravin’ you like my favorite song
I need a fix, barely hangin’ on
I cant I cant wait
Can't wait to see you run my fingers thru your hair
Ooh, I can't wait, I can’t wait
Can't wait till you’re lying beside me
Ooh, I can't wait, I can’t wait
Chorus
Cant wait to see you, do the things that ive missed
Feel you lying next to me, relive the first time we kissed
Skin on skin, breathing you in
Keeping me up all night
I Can't, I can't wait, I can't, I can't wait
I can't, I can't wait,
Till i Feel you lying next to me
I can't, I can't wait,
Till you keep me up all night,
I can't, I can't wait
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Hey Michael, the song has a nice current Country feel. The storyline of the lyric is a bit thin in my opinion, you are telling the same thing over and over again, maybe you can add some background to make the lyric more lively. Why haven’t you seen her for a long time? Maybe you are a soldier? Paint us a picture.
May 27, 2019
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Hey Frank thankyou for the feedback. This was more of a personal angle i was taking with the song and things i was feeling at the time. Like i diary entry kinda thing/letter to my girl. I see you angle as a soldier, that could be something else i could work on for sure. As you know sometimes its a challenge painting a picture in 3 mins that everyone can relate to. cheers for your time
June 05, 2019
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Frank Renfordt
Hey Michael, the song has a nice current Country feel. The storyline of the lyric is a bit thin in my opinion, you are telling the same thing over and over again, maybe you can add some background to make the lyric more lively. Why haven’t you seen her for a long time? Maybe you are a soldier? Paint us a picture.
May 27, 2019
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