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Silver Rings

Denise Penfold

March 18, 2019

Genre: Country

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I wrote this song for my daughter. I consolidated it with a picture video and presented is as part of my speech. I am not a vocalist but I wanted to record this entirely by myself as my gift to her.
I'm not real certain of the genre so I chose the closest to be country.

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Joseph Guerra

Pretty song Denise, Your voice is very good, maybe your comparing it to other artists..we all do that some nice harmonies, I’m sure your daughter loves it, that’s all that matters

March 21, 2019

Denise Penfold

Thankyou Joseph.

March 26, 2019

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A Baby Girl, wandering who she'll be
Will she be... just like me
The Doctor said here's your sunshine
Mother and Child, are doing fine.

Disney backpack, it's first day of school
Yellow school bus and playground rules
Swings and slides and ABC's
Short pixie hair and little scraped knees

Figure skating and hip hop dance
Cottage weekends ... every chance
She painted signs for her mouse house
She hung out on her beach till the sun went down

Sweet sixteen 90210
She had love but she didn't know
Got him back in the nick of time
For the second time, she said, he's all mine

Chorus:
Silver Rings and a stunning white dress
Purple lights for my princess
In that moment when Dad gave you away
I stood by proud on your wedding day

All those thoughts of who you'd be
Turns out a younger version of me
Small but mighty, yeah we'll always get by
Cause mother and child, still doing fine

Silver rings and a stunning white dress
Purple lights for my princess
You know that moment when Dad gave you away
I stood by proud on your wedding day
I stood by proud on your wedding day
I stood by proud .............

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Joseph Guerra

Pretty song Denise, Your voice is very good, maybe your comparing it to other artists..we all do that some nice harmonies, I’m sure your daughter loves it, that’s all that matters

March 21, 2019

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Denise Penfold

Thankyou Joseph.

March 26, 2019


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