I was recently going through my storage unit cleaning out old pictures, papers, etc. and the thought for this song came upon me. This song is in its infancy in regard to arrangement etc. as I only have it with guitar here.
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The touch of your hand
The sound of your voice
You walked away, I didn't have a choice
You said that we were through
And there was nothing left to do but hate you
Every picture of you and me
Every reminder of what we could have been
I threw it all away, nothing left to say
It's over, yeah it's over
And I wanted to forget
Your fingerprints are burned in my skin
Your kiss made my heart spin
The feel of your warmth, the heat from your mouth
How will I ever live without
Cuz' I'm starting to forget
Everything you would do, the way you said I love you
Your laugh and your smile made my life worthwhile
Say my name one more time
I'll pay attention and memorize
So I won't forget
Our bed no longer smells like you
I keep trying with someone new
But nothing seems to work
And all that I'm left with is hurt
Some times you visit me in my sleep
I think I see you driving down the street
I'm going to be strong
Time to move on
It's over, yeah it's over
But I'll never forget
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