Tongue-in-cheek blues.
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I've got those three day before payday
Three day before payday blues
I've got those three day before payday
Three day before payday blues
Don't want no deal with the Devil
My soul's too dear to lose
I've got those two day before payday
Two day before payday blues
I've got those two day before payday
Two day before payday blues
The old lady; she's run off
And my dog; he's leaving me too
Solo
I've got those day before payday
Day before payday blues
I've got those day before payday
Day before payday blues
If you cannot lend me five
How about lending me two
Solo
I've got those day after payday
Day after payday blues
I've got those day after payday
Day after payday blues
Now I've just got ten days to go
until I can start singing
Those three day before payday blues
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Wow, really nice and soulful Blues song you’ve created here! I was feelin’ it! I love the guitar work, turnarounds, solos, and your vocals sound great.
Awesome work!
December 06, 2018
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Reid Yamamoto
Wow, really nice and soulful Blues song you’ve created here! I was feelin’ it! I love the guitar work, turnarounds, solos, and your vocals sound great.
Awesome work!
December 06, 2018
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