I actually hesitated for a couple seconds before posting this song, as it was the first song I ever wrote. It's five years old now, written for a high school choral teacher who left right before my senior year.
Hey Melissa…nice!!! Being a piano player myself, I was immediately drawn in. Good lyrics sung with heart. Nice melody. Well done!!
October 15, 2013
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I think more should post their first songs on Frettie! I think it is a great way to see how far you have come and it allows others to be inspired by that growth. Some of my older music, I still find enjoyable.
As for my feedback, I think thing song is really nice. The piano, lyrics and your vocals appear to be right in sync nicely. The chorus is very catchy. I like the way you sing “It’s Not The End”.
Just curious, Is this you playing the piano?
September 11, 2013
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Hey Melissa…nice!!! Being a piano player myself, I was immediately drawn in. Good lyrics sung with heart. Nice melody. Well done!!
October 15, 2013
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Dennis Field
I think more should post their first songs on Frettie! I think it is a great way to see how far you have come and it allows others to be inspired by that growth. Some of my older music, I still find enjoyable.
As for my feedback, I think thing song is really nice. The piano, lyrics and your vocals appear to be right in sync nicely. The chorus is very catchy. I like the way you sing “It’s Not The End”.
Just curious, Is this you playing the piano?
September 11, 2013
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