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Simple country song about getting over a relationship. This is really a practice to learn how to upload a song. More to follow!
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That old clock on the wall, it don’t work anymore
But I don’t care, I got time to spare
Used to worry I’d be late when we met for a date
Now time allows, I have no worries now
Chorus
When you walked out the door, you hurt me to the core
I spent my time getting over you
There feels no point in feeling bad, after the good times that we had
I won’t forget you , you can be sure
I’m heading out for a beer, my life is one big blur
I have no plan, just time on my hands
Although my friends think I’m fine, I’m drinking too much wine
Helps me forget, that you have left
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Hi Alex, thank you for sharing your song with us. Nice old time Country tune. I wonder if this cheerful melody is a good match for the story? There are some mixed messages and I’m not sure whether is he okay or not? Is it a tragic story or not? Just a thought. Keep on!
July 21, 2018
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Frank Renfordt
Hi Alex, thank you for sharing your song with us. Nice old time Country tune. I wonder if this cheerful melody is a good match for the story? There are some mixed messages and I’m not sure whether is he okay or not? Is it a tragic story or not? Just a thought. Keep on!
July 21, 2018
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