A song about a slow afternoon park sit down.
Frank, thanks for listening and commenting. Yes, I’m trying to keep it upbeat. -FOX
June 15, 2018
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This is not typically the kind of music I listen to but your song definitely brought me to the scene described. Listening to this song was a nice pleasant escape. I would like to be where you were when you were writing this.
December 12, 2018
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A lot of good lyrics here! Very descriptive, really visual and takes you right there! Great job!
January 26, 2019
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In the distance, geese bellow
A wholesome sight, for this young fellow
An east wind, moves the brush
Quiet now ladies time to hush
Glad I veered off, on the red trail
Off I went, set sail
As I write, a small mention
About a little Sunday adventure
Two times I came here, in the past
Park was closed, gait acast
There was a sign, I stopped and stared
Said hikers beware of black bear
But now i am in, third time’s a charm
Mama and cubs, i mean no harm
Enjoy this park, and it's beauty
While i sit here, on my bootie
Sitting here, writing this song
On the surface, not much going on
Looking around, in a writing fog
Over here, at bullfrog pond
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The music to this song reminds me of country hits in the late seventies and early eighties.
June 11, 2018
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Frank, thanks for listening and commenting. Yes, I’m trying to keep it upbeat. -FOX
June 15, 2018
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This is not typically the kind of music I listen to but your song definitely brought me to the scene described. Listening to this song was a nice pleasant escape. I would like to be where you were when you were writing this.
December 12, 2018
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A lot of good lyrics here! Very descriptive, really visual and takes you right there! Great job!
January 26, 2019
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The music to this song reminds me of country hits in the late seventies and early eighties.
June 11, 2018
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