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I often drive through a housing development to get to the main road. Sometimes the garage doors are opened to reveal the treasures of a life lived...
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I like it a lot, Lance. I’m originally from the northwest too. Really pretty melody!! I agree, you might have to change your hook to get people to listen and hear your message:)
February 06, 2018
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Oh, just me, but I would be more apt to listen to if title was ‘Barbie Dolls And Paper Sacks:) You’ve got a lot of ‘good stuff’ in this song.
February 06, 2018
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Nice treatment, I love show no tell, great images and a wonderful story, I can hear the work you did on this - whoever is singing is absolutely drop dead on it.
Thanks -
September 22, 2019
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It is wonderful. I love songs about the stuff of the past. Maybe the title could change, because some people might not want to listen to a song about a garage. Maybe the title could be “Life’s treasures” or something that makes someone want to listen. Anyways great song. I actually cared about a garage.
February 05, 2018
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I like it a lot, Lance. I’m originally from the northwest too. Really pretty melody!! I agree, you might have to change your hook to get people to listen and hear your message:)
February 06, 2018
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Oh, just me, but I would be more apt to listen to if title was ‘Barbie Dolls And Paper Sacks:) You’ve got a lot of ‘good stuff’ in this song.
February 06, 2018
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Nice treatment, I love show no tell, great images and a wonderful story, I can hear the work you did on this - whoever is singing is absolutely drop dead on it.
Thanks -
September 22, 2019
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It is wonderful. I love songs about the stuff of the past. Maybe the title could change, because some people might not want to listen to a song about a garage. Maybe the title could be “Life’s treasures” or something that makes someone want to listen. Anyways great song. I actually cared about a garage.
February 05, 2018
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