Any and all feedback is welcome.
Hi Dave, I don’t really think I can give any feedback here, I quite like it. The chorus is great, the melody demands you to sing along.
August 29, 2013
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Walking Alone
by Dave Undis
VERSE
He went for a walk with me every day.
He couldn’t wait to be on our way.
He’d sit by the door ‘till I got home.
The other day my Buddy died.
I sat by his bed all day and cried.
Then I went walking alone.
CHORUS
Walking alone. No one by my side.
Walking alone since my Buddy died.
The best friend I’ve ever known.
Walking alone. He’s in heaven now.
Walking alone hoping he knows how
I miss him when I’m walking alone.
VERSE
Every day after walking with me
He’d take a nap by the willow tree.
Now he’s buried there with his favorite bone.
I was blessed to have him around.
When the cancer came I had to put him down.
And now I’m walking alone.
CHORUS
Walking alone. No one by my side.
Walking alone since my Buddy died.
The best friend I’ve ever known.
Walking alone. He’s in heaven now.
Walking alone hoping he knows how
I miss him when I’m walking alone.
VERSE
When I walk by the willow tree
I think about how it’s going to be
When the good lord calls me home.
Buddy will be waiting for me and then
We can go walking together again.
No more walking alone.
CHORUS
Walking alone. No one by my side.
Walking alone since my Buddy died.
The best friend I’ve ever known.
Walking alone. He’s in heaven now.
Walking alone hoping he knows how
I miss him when I’m walking alone.
Oh, how I miss him when I’m walking alone.
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Dave,
I must say as the owner of two dogs, I often would wonder how empty the house will feel when they pass, but I never thought about what It would be like to take a walk and to not have them by my side.
As a huge fan of the song “Feed Jake” this song reminded me much of it. In a good way. If I were to give any feedback , I would say the chorus is really catchy and kinda of stuck in my head for a few days. The verses are nice at helping paint the story, but in some places I feel like you could tighten them up a tad to feel stronger in context. All in all I really enjoyed this.
August 09, 2013
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Hi Dave, I don’t really think I can give any feedback here, I quite like it. The chorus is great, the melody demands you to sing along.
August 29, 2013
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Dennis Field
Dave,
I must say as the owner of two dogs, I often would wonder how empty the house will feel when they pass, but I never thought about what It would be like to take a walk and to not have them by my side.
As a huge fan of the song “Feed Jake” this song reminded me much of it. In a good way. If I were to give any feedback , I would say the chorus is really catchy and kinda of stuck in my head for a few days. The verses are nice at helping paint the story, but in some places I feel like you could tighten them up a tad to feel stronger in context. All in all I really enjoyed this.
August 09, 2013
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