This is meant to be a country song, even though the work tape sounds more like pop. Co-written with Barry Butler.
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More Than A Man
by Barry Butler and Dave Undis
VERSE
He brings home the bacon.
He helps around the house.
He’s a father to his children.
He’s married to their mom.
He volunteers at church.
He coaches little league ball.
He cleans out grandpa’s gutters.
He helps his neighbor mow the lawn.
CHORUS
He wears boots on his feet and tools on his belt,
And work gloves on his hands.
When something’s gotta get done, he does all that he can.
He’s a hero. He’s more than a man.
VERSE
He says he’s nothing special,
Says there’s lots like him around.
I don’t know what we’d do without him.
He’s the backbone of his town.
He keeps the wheels turning.
He makes the engines run.
He never breaks a promise.
He never leaves a job undone.
CHORUS
He wears boots on his feet and tools on his belt,
And work gloves on his hands.
When something’s gotta get done, he does all that he can.
He’s a hero. He’s more than a man.
BRIDGE
If you need help, just call him. He’ll come as fast as he can.
If you ever need a hero, he’s your man.
CHORUS
He wears boots on his feet and tools on his belt,
And work gloves on his hands.
When something’s gotta get done, he does all that he can.
He’s more than a man.
He wears boots on his feet and tools on his belt,
And work gloves on his hands.
When something’s gotta get done, he does all that he can.
He’s a hero. He’s more than a man.
He’s a hero. He’s more than a man.
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