Boy chases girl. Wins! 
Any. Please note that I'm not looking for a cut, commercial placement, nor am I looking to follow any structured music formula. (It would be great if Frettie would include a genre for Reggae... and also Trop Rock, which also a growing and newly recognized genre!)
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FOREVER GIRL
VERSE 1
Where are you girl? I been lookin all around
I've been high and low, I've been lookin' all downtown
Don't turn away, you know we've down this road
We belong together and not so much alone
PRE CHORUS
When we're together
Well everything is fine
I want you more than ever, girl
To be here by my side
CHORUS
You know I'll take the time to prove
Give you all I got
I know it's time to make my move
Just gimme a shot
You know your my whole world
Be my forever girl
Be my forever girl
VERSE 2
Rolling in the sunshine, you've got your brand new rollerskates
Wind in your hair, your just a child of the Golden State
Now we're on a corner down on 15th street
I ask you a little question, and the answer is oh so sweet
PRE CHORUS & CHORUS
INSTRUMENTAL BRIDGE (CHORUS CHORDS)
PRE CHORUS & CHORUS
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Couldn’t agree with you more regarding genres….it would be nice to include several of them. My hubs and I just returned from Jamaica so I am still in that state of mind…really like this…good luck with it!
July 19, 2018
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Dori Weaver
Couldn’t agree with you more regarding genres….it would be nice to include several of them. My hubs and I just returned from Jamaica so I am still in that state of mind…really like this…good luck with it!
July 19, 2018
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