This is one of my new songs I'm working on now. It will be on my Howm I Doin album...
maybe come in a little sooner…
Clean up the mix a bit ..I know its not finished I get it. experiment with singing it different ways ...you know the high parts.
January 19, 2018
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Alone & Waiting
words & music by Matt Maloof
(verse1) She said to wait right here for me
I won't be gone long, you'll see
Well the days went by and nights drug on
Something tells me, she ain't coming home
Not coming home
(chorus) Alone and waiting, Alone and waiting
Alone and waiting, by the door
(verse2) She said she'd always be there for me
Just give it time and you'll see
The days went by and the night drug on
My friend said hey man, she ain't coming home
not coming home
(chorus)
(guitar jam)
(chorus)
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Hey Matt
This feels like a good start but the mix is such that the vocals can’t really be heard above the band - reading the lyrics, could you vary the chorus maybe? Otherwise there’s a lot of repetition and as the chords are similar to the verse it gets a bit ‘loopy’ if you know what I mean?
October 20, 2017
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maybe come in a little sooner…
Clean up the mix a bit ..I know its not finished I get it. experiment with singing it different ways ...you know the high parts.
January 19, 2018
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Marcus Reeves
Hey Matt
This feels like a good start but the mix is such that the vocals can’t really be heard above the band - reading the lyrics, could you vary the chorus maybe? Otherwise there’s a lot of repetition and as the chords are similar to the verse it gets a bit ‘loopy’ if you know what I mean?
October 20, 2017
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