Midtempo Pop song reminiscent of James Taylor
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ON YOUR OWN
When you feel that you can't go on
With the things that you've known so long
And your life is just passing by
Then it's time to fly
When you see that the plans you've made
Have all been a masquerade
And you want to try something new
There's so much you can do
When you're finally on your own
When you're on your own, you're on your own
You can make all the world your home, all the world your home
When you're tired of the place you're in
And all of the things you've been
And you want to let in some light
Then the time is right
When you're tired of your heavy load
And you think you want to hit the road
Go to places you've never seen
Like you've always dreamed
When you're finally on your own
When you're on your own, you're on your own
You can make all the world your home, all the world your home
Repeat 1st verse & hook
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Hey, Bob! I dig the throwback, James Taylor vibe. Too much reverb for me, but that’s production, not songwriting. The lyric doesn’t really grab me, but it just feels good, so I don’t really mind. Okay… I gotta go listen to some Sweet Baby James now…
January 05, 2017
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Brent Baxter
Hey, Bob! I dig the throwback, James Taylor vibe. Too much reverb for me, but that’s production, not songwriting. The lyric doesn’t really grab me, but it just feels good, so I don’t really mind. Okay… I gotta go listen to some Sweet Baby James now…
January 05, 2017
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