Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on If Love is Real

Jayne: Thanks a lot for your nice comments and constructive feedback. River/riverside: Excellent point, it’s hard to be in the water if your your on the side of the river/riverbank. We should probably clarify this somehow. V1/line 2: You might be right. Maybe there is a better... Read More

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on If Love is Real

Noora: thanks a lot, appreciate you taking the time to listen to the song. Rusty: Thanks for your nice and constructive comments. Yes, it was intentional to make the chorus work for both characters. “Stared off” instead of “she was staring..”: Good call, thanks! More imagery: There can never be... Read More

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on If Love is Real

Michael: Thank you, appreciate you taking the time review the song. Angie: I know what you mean. From a songwriter’s perspective everything seems perfectly clear. Then you realise listeners might have a different opinion. Thanks for pointing this out.

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

Hi Mikalyn! Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it! Hopefully, I’m able to post a new version soon.

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on Antidote

Hi Mikalyn! What I love about this song: the verse melody, 1st verse lyrics, the piano arrangement and the vocals throughout the song. Soooooo good! What I miss is: 1) some kind of content development in the second verse. We already know he’s gone and that he left her feeling... Read More