Wordplay Thursday #223

Welcome to Wordplay Thursday!

Here’s a line to get you started. Feel free to use it to start off YOUR song.  It could be the first line of your song, or not.  Feel free to change the line up some.  Whatever gets you going!

“Don’t look surprised…”

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Brent

6 thoughts on “Wordplay Thursday #223”

  1. Here a quick start on Wordplay Thursday!

    Don’t be surprised

    I miss you too
    I miss all these moments
    that have vanished

    Walking apart
    like rain and fire
    like angels and hell

    Don’t be surprised
    roads cross each other
    minds go over mountains
    and the heart’s going far

    I miss
    the merry go round
    and memories
    of you

    Walking apart
    like rain and fire
    like angels and hell

    All these years we carry
    grey hair
    and body pains
    like the burden of life

    But don’t be surprised
    love erases
    the dark side of the day
    tenderness brings you back to heaven

    Walking back
    like rain and sun
    like angels and wind

    Don’t be surprised
    if the world turns its back
    to hapiness
    you know
    she’s in your heart for ever

  2. Here is a quick start for Wordplay on Thursday

    Don’t be surprised

    I miss you too
    I miss all these moments
    that have vanished

    Walking apart
    like rain and fire
    like angels and hell

    Don’t be surprised
    roads cross each other
    minds go over mountains
    and the heart’s going far

    I miss
    the merry go round
    and memories
    of you

    Walking apart
    like rain and fire
    like angels and hell

    All these years we carry
    grey hair
    and body pains
    like the burden of life

    But don’t be surprised
    love erases
    the dark side of the day
    tenderness brings you back to heaven

    Walking back
    like rain and sun
    like angels and wind

    Don’t be surprised
    if the world turns its back
    to hapiness
    you know
    she’s in your heart for ever

  3. Don’t Look Surprised

    Thank God you finally called,
    I dropped everything and I came.
    I’ve been wearing a track out on the floor
    Stomach knotted with your pain.

    The scent of whisky in the air
    The stubble on your face.
    When did you last wash yourself?
    How long have you been awake?

    Look at me
    You’re not alone
    I need you to understand
    Unlike her, I wont walk out
    I’m here, I’ll hold your hand

    Don’t look surprised, did you really think
    Drawn curtains would hide this mess?
    And no, I don’t mean all the dirty plates
    And the trash up on the bench.

    I let you be because you asked
    But you have to admit it’s time
    To stand up and take back control
    Start living your new life.

    Look at me
    You’re not alone
    I need you to understand
    Unlike her, I wont leave
    I’m here, I’ll hold your hand.

    Look outside, feel the warmth
    Of the sunlight on your face.
    That new day awaits you
    Time to take your place.

    Look at me
    You’re not alone
    I need you to understand
    Unlike her, I wont walk out
    I’m here, I’ll hold your hand.

    Look at me
    You’re not alone
    Now you understand
    I’m not going anywhere
    I’m here, you hold my hand.

  4. One verse and chorus…

    Chorus:
    Don’t look surprised.
    I know you love it super sized.
    I saw you lookin’ at that ring.
    I’m hopin’ it’s pullin’ on your heart strings.
    I don’t care about the money.
    Losing you wouldn’t be at all funny.
    With this ring I’ll wed to you.
    Now you know for sure my heart is true.

    V
    Getting tired of all the questions from our friends.
    When are you gonna stop teasing her?
    Don’t you know how much you really need to make sure?
    Tired of playing it cool and playing like I’m still in school.
    I’m breaking down, no more clowning around.

  5. There are words in your head
    That will never get said
    Cos you’re hopeless at sharing your feelings
    It’s another bad day
    So you push her away
    She just lies there and stares at the ceiling
    Deep in her heart she knows this can’t go on
    Don’t be surprised
    If you open your eyes
    And she’s gone

  6. “Don’t look surprised/I can see it in your eyes…All the tears that are holding back the pain
    “We’ve loved and we’ve lost
    We’ve cried and we’ve fought
    …Still,there’s so much love for you inside of me…..

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