Wanna know how just ONE LINE in your song can really mess up its chances for success? Here are a few ways…
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As you may know, each line in your song is important. Every line needs to be “on point.” Every line needs to point to the central idea, theme, and vibe of your song. Every line needs to pull its weight. Each line has a job to do.
And sometimes, one single line can mess up your song’s chance to get recorded or connect with your listener.
And I’m not talking about, “Oh, this line or that line was off-topic or was a little confusing.” Sure, those are things to be avoided because they DO hurt your song. But I’m talking about a few other types of lines…
The Cornerstone / Stumbling Block
It’s a mistake to make one line of your song TOO important. “If the listener misses this one line, they’ll get lost,” is a dangerous way to write. Don’t hang too much of the weight of your song on one line. Sadly, you can’t expect too much of the listener’s attention.
Listeners usually won’t give your song their full, undivided attention.
I write EXPECTING that the listener will zone out on at least a line or two while they get/send a text, honk at a bad driver, or get some notification on their phone. If that text comes during that ONE LINE they have to “get” or they won’t “get” your song… they won’t “get” your song! What you built to be the cornerstone of your song just became a stumbling block to your listener.
And this doesn’t have to be the line that provides “the big surprise twist ending.” It can be a line in the first verse that sets up that the singer is a single mom. Or is in prison. Or just got his heart broken. Whatever it is. Don’t hang too much on one line. Pepper that information throughout your song.
The Wait-For-It Line
This one usually IS the twist, surprise or otherwise killer line where you think, “if the listener will just listen until we get to THAT line (usually in the 2nd verse or bridge), I’ve got ’em!” Well, I hate to tell you… they probably won’t stick around.
The danger with a Wait-For-It Line is that you CAN’T make the listener wait for it. Every line needs to keep the listener’s attention. You can’t put clichés throughout the lyric, expecting the Wait-For-It line to save your song. The listener will tune out (literally or figuratively) before the line ever gets there.
Keep the listener’s attention with EVERY line.
The Crossed-That Line
This will really depend on your genre, but your song can be chugging along just fine, making the A&R person bob his head and tap his pencil, when all of a sudden you drop an F-bomb that has to be an F-bomb because it’s the rhyme, or you say something really negative about women, or something else that is a cut-killer. (Again, depending on genre.)
Another example of this is when a happy love song has a line that reveals that the singer is a parent or a grandparent. Nothing wrong with this, but it limits which artists can sing it. It might even be very important that the singer BE a parent or grandparent. But just realize the tradeoffs involved.
Those are a few cut-killing and connection-killing lines. Do you have a few more that you’d like to add? Have you put some cut-killing lines in your songs (admit it- we all have). I’d love to hear from you. Leave a comment!
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God Bless and Enjoy the Journey,
Brent Baxter is a hit songwriter with cuts by Alan Jackson, Randy Travis, Lady Antebellum, Joe Nichols, Gord Bamford, Ruthie Collins, Ray Stevens, and more. He’s written a top 5 hit in the US and a #1 in Canada… so far.